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Hello again, Namo! I have returned after finishing the entire short story. It was a lot of fun. Let’s dig in: I had a hard time picturing them in the ocean from this description. When I think of what the word seeped means, I think of someone slowly getting wet. Such as, ‘the water seeped...

I’m trying a slightly new style for Catnip. IDK if I’ll stick to it but you get to be my guinea pig. >:] Strong opening line. Good hook. I might’ve swapped out ‘touch’ for ‘brush’ since it’s alliterative with ‘branch’ and starts with a softer consonant than a hard ‘T’; sounds cleaner when...