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Additional feedback written after Week Three of Blitz closed: In general, this had pretty strong writing. Every now and again, there were conversational exchanges where a lack of dialogue tags, paralinguistics and scene-setting made the pacing go a little wonky, but that was about all I noticed...

Hi Inke! I've been hoping to get to review you sometime this Blitz. To start with, the pre-prose stuff. That's some deeply gorgeous art! Love the swoop of the wingull and the gorgeous waves and grass, particularly. So, this one's about a postmon, huh? I have a soft spot for couriers, and indeed...