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Well, this was a fantastically entertaining read. Thank you. Hope this makes it into the actual chapter. It's very good, and also a mood. YES!! This is just what I've always wanted to see out of this fic. Enemies to lovers, battling with their tongues! Perfect Every word of this hits so...

Mark POV! Should be fun. Definitely a different vibe, although not that strong yet. They're not totally dissimilar personalities as far as I can tell... "Civic engagement," nice. Got that realistic drama feel in the dialogue again. I enjoy it. Chuckling bitterly at this Hilary gal not wanting...

This chapter is a strong opening to the fic, with strong opening paragraphs that set the mood and provide plenty of worldbuilding elements in a way that is economical with wordcount and renders Natalie an interesting, sympathetic protagonist in short order. There's a good balance struck here...