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Figured I'd finish of this section of dungeon right quick while the previous chapters are still fresh on the mind. Here I go reviewing chappies eleven and twelve. Dungeon time reprise Irune seems to have some sense of the hole she's dug for herself here. As the argument (sorta) continues, she...

Get blitzed! I have returned just soon enough to somewhat remember things that have happened before now. And by 'now' I mean chapters nine and ten. Although I spent a good while swearing that I already reviewed chapter nine, I don't think I did so we start there. Action! Because nine in...

I return. First, two eensy-teensy replies. Review time. Chappies 6-8 now. Oh, war What stuck out to me most in terms of worldbuilding this time was a bunch of stuff surrounding the consequence of war. Yipee! Once again, great consideration of small details. The refugee camps and...

Back again, then I'll probably take a break until another update or whatever idk. Still messing around with format so hopefully this ends up readable. Chapters three through five. Outlaw Stuff Don't have much to say about prose and I'll point out fun worldbuilding stuff as it comes up, so I...

Yooooo why not kick of a first post by reacting to something I liked? I obsessed over this a little bit and my notes are shambles, but I've tried to structure it into something palatable. So here we go: some broad comments first and random, meandering thoughts after. Not sure if I missed...