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  1. surskitty

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Eternal Shadows

    Just going through the first chapter, haha .... First big thing I notice is you have a lot of exclamation points. It might be good to go over and remove a few; when there's a lot of them, they stop being a useful guide to intonation. Easy change to increase impact. It might also be good to...
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