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Heyo, here for chapter four! This one moves the plot along well; it reaffirms Red as a direct threat in Michi's life and sees him catch back up with Joanna to complete his plan. And he completed it! There are no chapters in the story after this one. Great work, Red! On a broader level, being...

Heyo! You know the score, here to review chapter three; did a quick re-read of everything before it just to refresh my memory because it's been a while. Glad to say I still enjoyed those opening bits as much as I did earlier, and just as glad to say I thought this chapter was a lot of fun. It...

Helix @ Red before the prologue: Anyway! I've heard enough about this story that I thought I'd drop by and offer some thoughts on where I've read up to so far (which is to say, the original prologue and the first two chapters). First off, I know I'm not the first to comment on how vivid the...