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waheyyy thanks for the blitz reviews :) they coincided with me going into editing mode on the prologue/chapter one, funnily enough; that one's been revised a bit. here're some responses while I'm here:

3. (AUTHOR'S NOTE, 20/01/2024: pssst, ignore this one for now, it needs a little bit of revision to fit the needs of the rest of the story. shouldn't be more than five or six days, I'd imagine. ta) Florence knew very few people who could afford optimism back home. Half the folks worked on...

2. “Can you tell me your name?” “Olivia,” said the girl, “b-but my friends call me Olive—” “Olive, I’ll do everything I can to help find him. Where did you last see him?” Olive paused with her feet planted on the spot. She looked up, wiping the tears from her eyes and sniffling, while Connor...

Got sidetracked for a bit there in responding to these most recent reviews — thanks for them, by the way! It's been a busy year on my end and I've been torn away from fic stuff, but I'm in a position where I think I should have more stuff ready to go very soon indeed (and, touch wood, more...

Thank you all for the comments; they were very insightful! I'll try to implement some appropriate line-by-line changes based on the feedback whenever I am able, which'll hopefully be before the end of the week. As for chapter two: I can't say when that'll be at this point, but hopefully...

0. I’ve seen it all I’ve seen it all; every so often some poor soul will tell you they know everything there is to know like they’ve scouted out every angle and consulted every source and unearthed every secret in all the world but I believe I speak with authority when I say that I have seen...

(artist: seaquestions) (...formerly known as Hey, Space Cadet!. Title taken from "The Rip," by Portishead.) Summary: Content Warnings: Broad strokes for the story as a whole: queerphobia; references to settler-colonialism; references to intrusive thoughts and non-graphic discussion of...