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Pokémon burner [oneshot]
I put most of my critique on a googledocs document because I have found that much nicer for me. Here is the link to it. I hope that works for you. Let me know if not. As my googledocs comments mentioned, I had some trouble following the metaphors toward the end. But ultimately, I read the story...- Word Count: 270
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