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@Pen An actual review response

Thanks for your review, @kintsugi. Took a bit before I had the chance to read and process it. I think you raised several good points, and I am experimenting with some changes that address them (though I am trying to be cautious about overreacting). I may add a new scene, but I am not sure. I...

@Negrek Thanks for the remarks, I went ahead and fixed the stuff that was obviously wrong, but I'll have to give myself some time to think before making any more substantial changes. I thought about having a scene with Sadie and Ferra, so now I'm kind of kicking myself for not doing it. I just...

Cosmic Reversion The world is saved from destruction, yet pokemon continue to turn feral. Oli and Sadie must find a solution or lose their own minds. Takes place after the events of Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Red/Blue Rescue Team. 12/20/2020 — Substantial changes to clarify the third scene...