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It's a post about chapter 7 A lot of humans feel this way too. I think this idea is going to hit harder as the story goes on and she realizes the mess she's gotten into. Speaking of which, the revelation at the end of the chapter (which I saw coming like halfway through the office scene, but...

Review for chapter 3 That was pretty funny (I want to see art of the skitty morph, that sounds adorable) Aww They sure are getting along well Kind of reminds me of some of the stuff I said for chapter 4. Since Laura cared about Salem, it makes sense to believe that her reasons for...

By mistake I read chapter 2 before chapter 1, so here is a review for chapter 2 I enjoyed this slow, subdued chapter quite a bit. The hurried sentences in the first scene got across Salem's overwhelmedness fairly well to me. I felt pretty invested in Salem's development, which I think is in...

It's a review! "The presence of human structures was visible" sounds clunky to me, as opposed to something like "Human structures were visible..." In retrospect, I feel like the epithets in this line nicely contrast Fuji and Giovanni. "Crime-lord" juxtaposed against something as banal as...