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I want to start by making sure it's clear that I don't, on principle, object to the fact that Haru broke the law or assaulted a guy, because I don't think that the extremity of those actions is disproportionate to the harm he's fighting against. It really is just his lack of focus on outcomes...

Review for chapters 7+8 Chapter 7 My kinda gal Usually science article titles are lowercase, except for the first word, but maybe the pokemon world has different conventions My sweet summer child. Also, does "money grubbing" need a hyphen? It's kind of an understated thing, but this...

A little review for chapters 5 and 6 ch 5 Cut "felt"? Interesting word choice with "correct", but in a good way. This is reminding me of how Celadon was portrayed in DD Finding it a little tricky to connect these two sentences. "made his way back" Should it be "by five to ten...

You know I probably shouldn't be reading this because I have my own thing to work on but here we are I read the very first sentence and was like "yep, that's Pen." Nice concise, evocative language. I like how the first scene conveys the character's feelings without messing up the pacing, and...