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I've become a stove, oh no! Anyway, I'll give some overall thoughts. I think it is cool that we see some courage from Haru here. She is averse to risking her own life but more averse to risking loved ones'. Umbra and Vale have a sort of amusing chemistry as well. As she remarks, they aren't so...

Oh boy, it is a review for chapter 19. Google doc suggestions here. Overall, I like this chapter. Things seem to be happening! I also find it interesting that Haru is breaking out of her usual routine and getting involved in something she cares about (exposing the gods for the bastards they...

Review for chapter 18: MUSE CHAPTER BABYYYYY I am glad to finally get a glimpse into what she's thinking. She is polite and nonconfrontational—doesn't want to tell Shimmer about her crush or worry her about the vision, doesn't want to ask Umbra why things smell like blood, doesn't want to pry...

Review time. Not much happens in chapter 17. Line comments can be found on this document, which is actually most of the review. Since the premonition bookends the chapter, I wonder if it would have made more sense to have all of it take place from Muse's perspective. She hasn't received much...

Howdy, Wind, hitting you with a quick review for chapter 16 because I like this story. We haven't really talked at all in a while, but I hope you're doing great. Well, Celebi's appearance didn't change things as much as I thought it would—at least not outwardly. But Nip's questioning whether...

Thoughts on chapter 15 The moment Haru decided she wanted to go watch Nip and Tempest filled me with dread. Not because I think they will attack her, but because I just know she's going to do something—as the kids would say—really cringy. I guess Vale wasn't aware she got kicked out last time...