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31: eight months later timeskip! timeskip! so jade is in johto now, with four badges no less. four badges in eight months is pretty good time, although i guess her team is already trained up—i guess that means a pokémon journey would take around two years for the average trainer? it's...

LC! we're back babey! 29: aftermath i took an accidental break from this fic a while ago, just because i sort of stopped keeping on top of it and never really got back to it... but my memory of the last dozen (?) chapters or so is a lot of nonstop action. i expected more of that coming back...

wow, scary chapter art! let's get right into it. dang, that can't be fun. i'm kind of surprised jade doesn't think of her family here? she hasn't seemed to think of them much at all so far, so maybe she just isn't all that attached, but i definitely would've expected some seed of worry there...

oof, as with tcats, i've sort of fallen off my review train here, but here's to keeping it up from here on out! it's truly amazing that you've managed to drop so many bombshells these past couple chapters, and i'm kind of wondering if you'll even be able to keep it up, but even if it tones down...

super long chapter means a super long review, i guess. sorry about that. i'm going to put the bulk of my thoughts on the chapter in a spoiler so i don't hog an ungodly amount of screen space: well, i can't say i'm surprised by this. to be honest, i'm not really sure what they were thinking...

it took too long for me to post my chapter 22 review, so forgive the back-to-back posting here. but woof, chapter 22 was heavy and 23 didn't really let up. astrid's identity reveal completely blindsided me, and i'm kicking myself for coming so, so close to getting the point. i've pretty much...

boy, this sure is a chapter. whew. i had some things to say about it in chat, but there's a lot going on in this one, so i'd like to go on about it a bit more here. i think the stream-of-consciousness type thing you've got going on in this chapter is really good for underscoring the sense of...

well, i finally caught up with LC! i've been working through this for a couple weeks now so i'm really glad to finally be up-to-date :D i read too much at once to offer any specific feedback at this point, really, but i plan on reviewing chapters as they come out from now on. overall, this fic...