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i forgot to crosspost OOPS. here for chapter 9 2.0 --- I do want to open this up by saying I think your editing turnaround is insane on these; the amount of new material in this on such a short turnaround is really impressive. Editing is a scary beast but in this case I think it really, really...

so I was checking for a front page index and it turns out this fic is one year old tomorrow, which is a happy accident on my part all according to my master plan ofc. congrats on a solid year! 80k words published is a behemoth, and it's certainly been a fun ride. Okay, so the most recent two...

hey hey, here for chapter 8 👀 Okay, so a lot of things start coming together here! I like the link between shiny pokemon and the sin pokemon--I was curious how those plots were going to come together, and this does feel like a neat way to resolve things. The media erasure bit from the old...

hiya, here for catnip! chapter 7. Clovis! I admit I mostly know him just from seeing the mafia thread in very brief passing (and okay let's be real it was 100 pages and I did not read all of it) so mostly I'm just coming into this knowing the one meme. (and, note from the future, wow did this...

alrighty, breezed through chapters 5/6! mostly kept this big picture; my brain's not fully into line edits today, sorry! I think, revisiting my commentary on chapter 4, you could probably combine chapters 4 and 5 if you wanted. Your call. But both are kind of introspective sections with Odette...

Here for chapter 4! Slowly chugging along! I feel like this is the last of the buildup chapters and things are finally clicking into place--Odette's personal traumas and the sacrilege investigation are starting to collide. Only good things will happen here. I like how you establish Odette's...

hi hi, here for catnip and some overdue thoughts on this! honestly mad props to keeping up with edits throughout the months--it's been a while since I last read for the beta, but it looks like things have been tidied up, some sections moved around, etc. in general I think things cleaned up...