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hi Umbra! long time no see! I'd already read this chapter before the catnip assignments got switched so I figured I could drop in anyway! I think I read somewhere on Discord that you preferred to focus more on positive things in your reviews, so I tried to go that route? For the most part my...

I don't wanna beat dead horses, so obligatory comment that Callie would be even more fun if she didn't just talk about Necrozma all the time, but also, heh. I understood that reference! Ha! This is a pretty funny gag. Victrebel's dumb spelling is rubbing off here, I think. You flop...

Okay. Thoughts. Some of which are more coherent than others. As mentioned in the previous review/Discord, I find it a little easier to collect thoughts on a bunch of chapters at once rather than one or two, so here are general thoughts for chapters 2-8. Do note that I didn't really get much from...

okay, coasters aside, let's do this! A few things -- this seems to be older work that you're cross-posting, so I really don't like going *ham* on it because a) it's older work and you've probably changed a lot since writing this chapter the first time and b) a lot of structural issues...