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review for chapter 7! in which Raskin aggressively calls out my holiday activities I liked this chapter--it focuses very tightly on the shattering team dynamic between our main trio, and reintroducing Tyler to stir up some issues was a great call. I like how you set up his introduction here...

oh yes, should've clarified--part of Fight Club that I think resonates the most with viewers (given that most of them don't end up wanting to go full Tyler Durden) is the idea that your corporate job strips you of your humanity--you become a drone, businesses view you as objects, etc. And then...

Playing some catch-up real quick! Here for chapters 4-6; I had things sectioned out nicely by chapter and then I promptly forgot instead. w h o o p s The dynamic between Raskin and his father is really poignant in this one. Loved the idea that Raskin feels some sort of shame about his father...

Chapter 3! Putting the fight in fight club! Overall I haven't got terribly much to say. I think the fight was written in a really dynamic way, and I like that Sid and Raskin didn't fully agree with how they felt about the outcomes here. I'm curious to see where they end up going from here...

Glad I was helpful! Rip Raskin’s galaxy brain haha ooh! I can actually help with this if you’re in Word! Similar em dash conversion as en dash conversion, just have no spaces. So: will auto to em dash, whereas will auto to en dash. Usually I feel bad pointing this out to folks who don’t use...

Haha, naturally! I'm curious where this is going, and what it means for some things to fall into place, haha. This chapter eases off on the existential despair, which is nice. There's some really interesting worldbuilding here with the idea of pokemon who don't live in the city, and how...

Hey there! This fic had some interesting themes floating around and I was curious to see how they unfolded. How would multi-species society function in a modern context? Is that primal instinct to punch things in the face something we all share? Can foxes hold spoons when they eat cereal or do...