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if i had a nickel for every time i tried to cram pen catchup in the last few hours of blitz before realizing that this was probably the thing i've been wanting to catch up the most on and now i can die happy ignores SC final chapter-induced anxiety, i'd have two nickels, which isn't a lot. but...

it's true that I haven't reviewed since the vigilante, but please understand that 1) this image has been living in my head rent free since I read the protoge part one and 2) I actually hate drawing clouds because what is geometry?? and 3) my artistic struggle of "kint, no, you can't, a...

A wild MONKEY'S PAW appeared!

look, I should probably feel some sort of emotion for trying to substitute reviews instead of shitposts here, but I tapered off reviewing and then two/three chapters came out with hints of another multipart one being worked on soooooooo ... I'm just saying the birds are pretty kind. this is...

the agent ah yes good thing they can see home as soon as that happens, yup, nothing to see here I'm struck because I tend to find myself telling people no, stop doing summaries instead of fiction, they don't work, you need description and individual scenes to tell a story. But this chapter...

gud chapter please update. I like how this chapter is about Lance winning his biggest victory yet, but at the end of it he's still exiled, just in a metaphorical sense. Looking back on these I think it's fun to see the recurring theme of Walanceu wrestling with this idea that power gives you...

Better late than never? Part 1? The Prequel?? The Recruit, Part 1. So much good stuff here! I like your characterization of Archer; as with Okido, you get a lot across the page in very little space, and I come away with strong "do not fuck with" vibes, which is perfect, since I figure...

extra space before the em dash here I think? Also, fun detail. Wataru is learning but not fast enough lol lovely bit of description here The link here isn't there for me. Wataru has seen tons of types of pokemon fighting for what they want, so the fact that it's just training fighting-types...

joke's on me i wrote the FFN version first so no quote feature 4 u But ... Aqua Tail in part one ... tbh I don't care this motif of shedding is such a good one for this chapter this is going to be really important?? chekhov's shed 2020??? This is such a good but bad idea. I love it. This...

Partially because it's been three weeks since I read the chapter that made this his last name, partially because it's surname/first name in Japanese (which is a good detail!), partially because 3/4 of the words are foreign to me -- I really couldn't parse "Fusube Wataru, Fusube City" very well...

oh no my heart I think the word "deserve" would be better here? I wasn't sure how she'd want to finish this sentence in a way that the next word/phrase is something she doesn't want to say. no yeah just throw it on the ground i didn't need my heart anyway ... what did they tell him anyway...

ah yes i remembered my FFN and my TR logins at the same time, how convenient I liked how you parsed this out! In my head though, I think the "wa" sound is a lot quieter than the others because of how the emphasis goes on "ta" and the sharp sound of "ru" -- I think the last half of that name...