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Catching up again with the most recent interlude–though I think I’d like to re-catch up after the new chapter drops, looking at this deliciously long list of patch notes. I know you’re on other things~~ rn, but I do enjoy your less flammable fic as well and it’s quite cozy. Celebi is such a...

I like the through-line here of embracing the past and seeing how it shapes us still. For Una it's partially literal; for Chris, it's not. But this is a really beautiful way to capture this idea of growing up--you can't recognize yourself, but maybe you've become someone you would've loved and...

I apparently never reviewed this chapter despite memeing about it constantly. WHOOPS. This is a fun development! I thought that maybe the cyndaquil came along after dad died, hence the name, but this makes sense. This flashback was fun, I think -- gave an appropriate sense of melancholy while...

i don't really have anything to add except that i never thought i'd see these words in succession before really fun bit of description! this one too -- the scene with Miki is a nice break. It gives us a lot of insight into Chris as a character through the guise of describing another; it's...

oh, you absolutely can burn your tongue on them if they're red bean paste -- just much less likely if they're jelly for anything to be piping hot "ah yes, I remember when I had parents plural" NEVER NOT EDITING. KNOCK 'EM DEAD!! Ahhh! The sandshrew from the prologue is back and she's a...

wowowow using my brand new quoting abilities! horrifically on-brand for what we discussed today, but you actually *do* toss up your space/no spacing em dash conventions. I think you more commonly do spacing around them, so I wanted to flag this one since it stood out w/ no spaces. dumb...

I think "an thump" would fit better here. The sentence structure with the slow build and the em dash into action is *chef's kiss*, but I think "all at once" isn't necessary and separates the interruption from the actual action -- there's a lot of words here before "dove", when that's really the...

it! is! after camp! i am free I do believe this is the earliest title drop I have ever seen oh no oh NO what's the name meaning here tbh? very stupid nitpick, but I think "on the floor" only registers as being the same as "fainted" to me when the pokemon doesn't normally walk -- otherwise...