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  1. kintsugi

    Pokémon Wandersword

    a wander of swords this is the seventh chapter of wandersword and we've been waiting months for it a dream of spring is the seventh book in a song of ice and fire and we've been waiting years for it coincidence? i think not. in this essay i shall explain the true secret behind the iron-type...
  2. kintsugi

    Pokémon Wandersword

    circling around for ch6! small note; I don't think this made it into your front page table of contents (but there is a threadmark, bless) This one is fun! I see what you mean about stuff starting to pick up pacing-wise; it looks like a bunch of different plot threads are starting to come...
  3. kintsugi

    Pokémon Wandersword

    hi hi it's me! I didn't realize you'd updated Best Duck into real canon! I think you want "caliber" here unless this is a British spelling or something The word "gently" for me conveyed a weird image -- it feels almost wistful, fond of the idea, but the next sentence makes it seem like Prim...
  4. kintsugi

    Pokémon Wandersword

    caught this in chapter 4 when scrolling -- accidentally forgot a word here onto the present day! There's something here about repeating ending a sentence with "before" twice that disrupts your cadence, methinks. Normally your prose is buttery-smooth so this one stuck out a little to me. as a...
  5. kintsugi

    Pokémon Wandersword

    shortish review because I keep putting it off; sorry :') I always love little details like this because they show that not only is the villain a massive shitlord, but he's so shitty at being high up on his high horse that he needs two people to help him get there. characters Ferrycloth and...
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