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Hi, hello. Most of my thoughts went through on the beta but I still want to leave them here? Seems unfair that you only get to hear my shitposting in private. Chapter 13 is Very Good. The battle scene is really chaotic but I love how you portray how dangerous pokemon could be, while also making...

*he I was going to make a shitpost about how every word in this shitpost must be perfect but it occurs to me that the beginning might actually be used in the real chapter 14 SILVER LASHES UWU I actually feel like this is from the regi chapter? if not it's a criminally good metaphor for a...

I relinquish to qva the sheer honor of the crowning the lit fortnite yeet floss dab upon Mark and will have to make my career in shitposting in other ways. Some really eye-catching moments here, mostly the tyrantrum friend and Steven's entrance. Very cinematic, very triumphant. This is an...

Ch 11--how time flies! I forgot how chunky this one is + how much happens; I like it. I kept thinking that the shipyard scene had to have been in the next one simply because there's so much shit already going down, but I think you keep the tempo in a decent spot throughout. I like how this is a...

most of my crit went through on the beta, so now I just get to talk about things I like and aggressively shitpost; back in my native element. I really liked the atmosphere that gets set up here. I don't particularly know what the Joseph Steven Stone Jr. chapters are particularly building...

oh shit! stealth updates, oh my. I think it's really interesting that in the heat of the moment this battle becomes about personal stakes rather than public ones--the oil spill takes second hat. Now it's just s/he angy, no step on turf, boo, bad. And I thought that was a really interesting...

Okay, it's me, playing catchup for a ton of things, starting from like chapter 2 I guess since somehow I never actually got around to writing reviews and just shitposted in DM's instead. Most of my thoughts have been said over DM but here are a few general ones that somehow escaped? I think...