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  1. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion

    Hello! I am finally coming into this thread to reply to... one (1) person's reviews. @Seren 's reviews are recent enough to be on my mind and had a lot of things I wanted to clarify, so my brain was actually able to get itself to write up a response in a vaguely timely fashion. Apologies to...
  2. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Extras: Foregone Conclusion the Musical (no, seriously)

    Thanks everyone for your reviews! I really enjoyed reading them and will get around to replying to them all at some point, I promise. However, I didn’t want to let the need to do that cause me to put off posting this other thing in here for even longer than I already have been. Foregone...
  3. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Threadmarks: Losing

    Losing ~xxxviii~ “Missed again!” Tefiren called out gleefully. Trees and branches rustled and crashed behind him, the sounds of a horde of Sceptile fighting to reorient themselves. Breathless laughter forced its way out of Forsira as she ran alongside him, shaking her head in incredulity...
  4. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Threadmarks: Breaking

    [If you read the spoilered content warning in the first post of this thread, here is the promised heads-up that the scene I talked about in there happens in this part.] Breaking ~xxxi~ Azma could hear the thunder rolling in, dark clouds approaching from over the sea. The rainy season was upon...
  5. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Threadmarks: Doubting

    Doubting ~xxvii~ “I said I was a lighter sleeper than you!” Tefiren called over his shoulder as the two of them pelted between the trees. “Okay!” Forsira screeched at him. “I believe you!” Now was really not the time to be discussing this. Not when a Sceptile was pursuing them at top speed...
  6. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Threadmarks: Accepting

    Accepting ~xx~ The Sceptile leapt and spun in midair, smacking an airborne Swellow with his spiked tail and sending it crashing to the ground. Before it could struggle up and get away, he landed on top of it, its piercing squawks barely registering with him as he lit one of his lethal blades...
  7. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Threadmarks: Discovering

    Part Two: Ignorance Discovering ~xv~ Tefiren let out a whoop of triumph as he drove one of his blades at a Tropius’s flank in just the right place to knock it off balance and send the huge beast staggering sideways. The Tropius glared at him and flapped its wing leaves, producing a flurry of...
  8. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Threadmarks: Changing

    Changing ~xi~ Meeting Raphyn must have reminded Zathern that there was a lot more than one Grovyle around that he counted as a friend. He met up with Raphyn again several times after that, for practice battles or joint hunts, as well as with many other part-time friends of his that he’d at one...
  9. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion

    @Flyg0n Thanks for reading and dropping by to give your thoughts! I am happy that my Discord rambling and Tefiren's mafia shenanigans made you curious to check this story out. I also read quite a lot of those sorts of animal-POV books when I was a kid, too! Maybe they influenced this just a...
  10. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion

    @Pen Thanks again for commenting! It's kind of interesting how much you're enjoying and engaging with the mysteries presented so far, because I really didn't consciously intend for this to be a mystery story. But I suppose it just happened that way thanks of the perspective of the kids with...
  11. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Threadmarks: Growing

    Growing ~vi~ Forsira never asked Azma what she would evolve into after Grovyle. It wasn’t that she didn’t think Azma would know – adults knew everything, especially her – it was that she didn’t want to be told that she’d be a Sceptile. She wanted to hold onto the hope of being an Archopy for...
  12. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion

    @Pen Thanks for your comments! It's really interesting to see the thoughts of someone who doesn't already know roughly what's going on when coming into this fic. I've always been quietly pleased with the way I drip-fed the relevant worldbuilding information throughout these earlier parts, so I'm...
  13. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion
    Threadmarks: Learning

    Part One: Innocence Learning ~i~ From the moment her parents’ panicked voices woke her in the night, she knew they were going to die. She was still young and understood little about the world, but one thing her parents had stressed was that they wouldn’t be there forever. One day, they’d be...
  14. elyvorg

    Pokémon Foregone Conclusion

    Hello, everyone! Welcome to an old fic of mine that I wrote and completed for NaNoWriMo 2010 (yes, that long ago) and posted on Serebiiforums back then, now being posted here on Thousand Roads so that a new audience can read it! Foregone Conclusion is a story about a genocide and how different...
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