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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    Chapter 19 pokemon language confirmed tonal and agglutinative. Anyway, this does still make me wonder the same thing as I did way back, which is how the Pokémon all seem to share a common language. Especially when the description here seems to talk specifically about how Lucario communicate...
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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    I'm back again! And about time, too. I'd been considering moving over to FFnet to continue for a while, but never found the proper moment, but now that the story's continuing here, I've got no excuse. Chapter 18, here I go. GeL security footage of Curio being bathed GeL security footage of...
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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    Chapters 14 & 15 Colon seems weird here, but I think the whole structure is a bit iffy. Replacing the colon with a comma would make it sound like Curio was glistening, but removing it entirely doesn't read quite right either. Just a simple break up to "[...], looking deep into Mom's eyes. They...
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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    Chapter 13 huh that went better than expected Missing period. Mm, wouldn't it be "me and your brother have your back" since having someone's back is supporting them? *swum, though it's Curio speaking so idk Well... not sure if that checks out completely, but I guess I'll take a badass...
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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    Chapter 12 This reads oddly, shouldn't it be "don't"? Not sure what "its" refers to here, but "their" I would get. trumks hehe good pun incredible realism: my dad says this verbatim every time i vent about my drawing ability this is basically the concept of pokemon ranger if you...
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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    ow oh and digitigrades walk on the balls of their feet by default grumble grumble Missing period? because two legs good no legs worthless C U R I O U T E red akai would like to know your location Now that I mention it, though? I feel like the "nevermind" should be at the start of...
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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    hue This makes sense, but then also kind of doesn't. How is an individual referred to when they're not present? In terms of the family's father, they refer to him by his title of father, but what about siblings? Is it then by their age in comparison to the others, like Curio introduced his...
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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    shine must be high in many ways As innnn cooking oil or dinosaur juice? *He? *y'know damn tony chill af Remove comma, I think. oh no oh god she killed people to dissect them and see what makes them tick* *This is the second joke I have made about Curio being a serial killer so I...
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    Pokémon The Curious and the Shiny

    you fools thats how theyre gonna Rise Up!! Seems like this is the first mention of this. Pokémon therapy, huh. I wonder what that goodra needs it for. i do wonder now, do goomy swim like jellyfish You're gonna want just one or the other, only or just. missing space Shine was pretty...
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