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Here for chapter 5! Since it's past of the past, you'd want "hadn't been a dream, none of that had been". Introducing him as hyperactive is kind of telling rather than showing, and since you do show it well later that he is hyperactive, this addendum could be omitted. I think it's unnecessary...

Hey! I read everything that's up so far for our exchange. Here are my thoughts. Shiny! Cool. I like this line. The "and yet" makes it seem like the thought that's to come is something motivating Chappie to go instead of stay, but then it's said that the thought terrified her. I was expecting...