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Catnip delivery! Chapter two flavor! This is the first mention of Noel riding with her if I read right, and to me it's pretty late on - the start really painted a picture where I thought Odette was riding solo, so when Noel was mentioned after it was kind of jarring to have to retroactively...

Hey! Here for Catnip. As you requested, I've read the revised first chapter. I skimmed the prologue for a recap as well, but I didn't pick up much that had changed so I have no comments to give there. As the second half of this chapter also seemed to match the content of the corresponding scene...

As fate keeps pushing us together, I have read the first chapter for Catnip and these are my thoughts. We definitely move away from the tone of the prologue in this chapter, getting something much slower and grass-roots than evil lairs and monster kills. I'm a fan of that as it lets us take in...

Responding to your reply - sorry that it took so long. I'm glad to hear I could be helpful! And in general, I'm happy that you took the review well. In hindsight, I feel like I was harsher than necessary and jumped to some pessimistic conclusions when I should've given more benefit of the...

Decided to try this out and read the prologue. Here are my thoughts. I will have to be direct from the beginning and say I did not really enjoy this. I will, however, try my best to be informative about why rather than discouraging. The beginning half of this prologue feels much like something...