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Hi there! Here for Catnip, reviewing chapter 17. A note not specific to this chapter - I skimmed the previous chapter to recap and I like that you put in some small reminders of things, like mentioning Rui still thinks Wes was undercover in Snagem or that Duking doesn't trust Wes. It's been a...

Hi! Caught up with this a few days ago and finally got around to reviewing now. Quote Comments Stray space here? Missing space after period. Pidgey can be mothers? I take it that evolution isn't the same as aging, then. So Nani's off model, I take it? Given Croconaw usually have orange-ish...

Hey there! Decided to read chapters 11-14 for Blitz. Here we go. Chapter 11 A bit surprised to see Wes anxious in such a "safe" situation, but I feel like there may have been something like that before that I've just forgotten by now. It does make sense, though, for someone used to quiet and...

Hey there! I chose OSAS for the fic to review for the anniversary challenge, and I've read chapters 6-10. Quote Comments (6-10 combined): today were dancing for no reason. someday well disappear for no reason. wes coming in with SHE ASKED FOR NO PICKLES energy Missing space. Missing capital...

Chapter 5! And I took only... three months to get to it. Oh wow. hahaha no wes.... im an empath.... and i sense something horrible happened here.... Actually I like the mention of the tea set a lot, it brings both a sense of continuity and contrast between then and now. me toy Weird...

I finally return for another chapter! Chapter four in this case. Let's get right into it. I had some trouble parsing this since I kept reading "the driver underneath her hands". *googles name* *no results* 👀👀👀 MYSTREY this is exactly how they fuck in romance movies rui "only one bed" trope...

Hey there! It's been a while, but I've come back for Chapter 3. Here are my thoughts. damn, hollywood got there before they did This was interesting to me. I don't remember if it was specifically said in the game(s) that Orre doesn't have wild Pokémon, but if not, that's a cool way of...

Hey there! I've been seeing you and other talk a lot about this story, and my curiosity's finally gotten the better of me. I was originally just going to read and review the first chapter, but after how short it was, I went for the second, too. And I do also know how annoying it can be to...