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  1. canisaries

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    Hey! Here from Catnip. Let's take a look. Standing over "them" would make more sense to me, since the "some" is implied to be many people. "had fallen on their face" would read better here, since the narration is already in simple past. I think this sentence should be broken into two (His...
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