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Hey there! Betcha didn't expect a new post in this thread, huh? Well, you're half right. For the past whatever weeks, I've been working on a revision to HIM, one where we see waaaayyy more of Kohath and Helixian history. The start and end of the story are still mostly the same, but there are a...

Thank you for the read and review! The edit suggestions have been noted, but don't know when I'll get around to implementing those with everything being so hectic right now ;p Work and school, respectively. These mon are indeed sapient and so can function close to how humans do, though the...

aaaaaaaaAAAAAAAA freakin finally. After 6k words worth of outtakes and redos and then the 12k that made it in, Whelp is finally done. That's not to say it's in a rigid, finished state - I definitely want feedback and will try to implement critique if I can. Just... know that it might take a...

Thank you very much for the read and reply! I didn't even know about stoicism before this, haha. What I was going for is tied to emotional detachment, though, as I'm basically attempting to write a sociopath. It's not really 1:1, though, as there's that whole Twitch business complicating it...

Crap, you're totally right. Forgot about the Voices at that part. I'll edit it to be consistent. Oh, that's true. I'll make a mental note to show better in Seiren that Helix does know Red and aspects of His previous life Looking more at the sentence, it does look weird, will fix, as well as...

EDIT 2: A new version of HIM has been posted. Follow this link to it. EDIT: Whelp has been finished and posted! Follow this link to it. So at the time of me writing this, I'm kind of stuck in writing this oneshot called Whelp. It's sort of a sequel to another oneshot named HIM, which is about...