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Mother of reviews! This sure is one. To let you in on a secret, when I was plotting Seiren way back in its previous unfinished version, Tamaki was just something I inserted because the story didn't feel right ending so quickly. To this day, I haven't really come up with anything better and I've...

Thank you both for the reviews! Sorry for the late replies, life's been hectic. Right, I should probably add that in the author's notes here as well instead of just in Hunter, Haunted: there is a story that bridges these two together called Metanoia, and it precisely answers why Red views Helix...

@GrayGriffin Thanks for the review! The prologue I can definitely confirm is not meant to be comedic, so no surprises there - it's meant to establish the strong attachment Red has with Helix, which is really the driving force of the plot. The first chapter, though, is written with the same tone...

Google Docs unfortunately doesn't seem to, on neither desktop nor mobile. If I really need an em (or en) dash, I find myself googling it and just copy-pasting the character from the results as it's still easier than alt codes in my opinion. Maybe it's not filtering in the traditional sense of...

I'm not sure how it couldn't be a thing? It takes time for eyes to focus to a certain distance, and that also requires eye musculature to happen. Or I'm not sure how it works in cephalopods, but I need to draw the line at mollusk anatomy research somewhere. I'm aware, but I absolutely refuse...

Basically that - he sees more clearly and the light isn't as blinding as prior. A club is basically the "hand" parts of a tentacle, yes - and by that I mean an actual tentacle and not an arm, which both octopuses and squids have eight of. More explanation here. I do have Red freely refer to...

Thank you very much for the read and reply! Very glad you enjoyed this story. I understand this problem and it was something I struggled with. Seiren has an unfortunate position in the series where it actually can't change the status quo too drastically or it would break the setup for Hunter...

:O this is so wonderful to hear, thank you! You'll be glad to hear there's more exploration of this in future chapters. I can explain some here, though, as it leans on TPP stuff and so isn't really spoilers as it's there in the source material (where it isn't spoilers either). The journey Red...

Okay, now we are finally done for really reals - here is the epilogue. Same ratings as always. Hope you enjoy. --- EPILOGUE --- It's been about a week since my freakout. I haven't spoken to Him since. Fonz I've only had brief conversations with, and few have mentioned Him. How is He doing...

Here it is, finally, after two years: the finale of Seiren. Two years, that's how long ago the original version's penultimate chapter was posted, and it never received its conclusion - until now! I need to say, however, that this isn't really the end, as I'm intending to still write a short...

huge thanks for all these reviews! the review event really did good for this story, and i'm super glad. i hope all you new readers are enjoying this story, too. now for the long awaited penultimate chapter. at least until further notice. while this chapter is a longer one, the last scene has...

Ah, yeah, I think I keep overestimating how reconstructable some elements of TPP are from the references... it's not a spoiler what it is, so I can just explain it now for clarity: In TPP, the biggest danger to progress was the PCs. Because the game doesn't let you recapture a mon after...

Oh, this is actually the first letter Shirlee sent Red, though. Before the surprise visit in Chapter 3, the communication had been entirely one-sided. Well, it's actually tied to where the time has been read. In the case of the 24-hour instances, Red reads the time from a digital clock - first...

You are not prepared. Here is Chapter 10, rated teen like before. --- CHAPTER TEN Bottom Text --- Today I learned that girls really don't like it when a guy they barely know chases after them. I'm calling double standards on this bullshit - no way they would've screamed had I been a girl as...

ho ho ho merry seiren new chapter rated teen with language, violence and some misc mature topics briefly mentioned nnjoy --- CHAPTER NINE And Then Everybody Clapped --- I’m gonna do it. I’m gonna do it. I’ll kill him. I’ll kill the ninetales. No one is around. They weren't planning on...

sdfgsdhgjhgk hey yall i got another chapter for you here and things happeeeeennnn in it ok cool rated teen like always enjoy --- CHAPTER EIGHT Pallet Patrol --- I swear, people are too responsible nowadays. It took a good two freezing hours to finally get someone to fetch me a bottle of fine...

hooray! i am very late with this! reason is uni as always. anyway, rating is still teen this time, but unlike before, there are also some... seckshual jokes... 😳 well, enjoy --- CHAPTER SEVEN Digital Dummy --- “Honey, wake up!” I jolt awake from the shout, heartbeat kicked to superspeed in...

new chapter, get your new chapter here, only zero dollars. rated teen enjoy pls like comment and subscribe --- CHAPTER SIX I Celadon't Want to Be Here --- “Man, it feels so good to drink without having to show a license or ask some guy on the street to buy me some…” Shirlee sighs. Arktos...

uni continues to kick me booty but here we are with chapter 5. wanted to add a scene and trudged through three quarters of it until i realized it just didnt fit into the story properly and had to trash it. sad rated teen as always enjoy --- CHAPTER FIVE Fine Whining --- The lobby of Celadon...

aaaaaa chapter fooour it's late because uni is crazy aaaaaaa chapter name is subject to change because i am reaching so hard aaaaa still rated teen enjoy aaaaaa --- CHAPTER FOUR Video Kills The Radio Star --- I've always known it gets quiet in this house, but only now, after listening to...