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Here to review Chapter 7 for the Roulette! Sorry I'm late. I see, so he was in a "war" on pokémon rather than a human-human war. Interesting. I have to stretch my suspension of disbelief a little at an evolution method not being public in the age of the internet, even if trainers are...

Heya! Here for Catnip, unloading some more of my reading notes. Here's my thoughts on chapters 5 and 6. Chapter 5 Missing capital. *pulls on collar comically* Missing capital. Period to comma. Remove capitals. Huh, didn't expect an Alolan mon. Also, Alolan should be capitalized, right...

Hey there! I've been reading more of this fic at work when it's slow. Here are my thoughts on chapters 3 and 4 for our exchange. This "it" is pretty far from the word it's referring to ("door"). It could be replaced with "the door" to read better. As a demonym, Unovan ought to be capitalized...

Back for an exchange! Here are my thoughts on chapter 2. Ooh, a teleport service. It makes sense to be scared of fearow. A bird of that size wouldn't be a threat to a human in real life, but Pokemon are superpowered. Sentence ends abruptly. Graveler, with one L. This spelling kept consistent...

Hey there! It took a while, but I read the first chapter as per the review exchange, and here are my thoughts. Quote Comments Sentence cuts off? *graveler Protag makes a point of not giving Brock any confident gestures, but then a little bit later he smirks, presumably on purpose? oh...

Hey! Read Fate's Design as part of the review exchange. Here are my thoughts. Quote Comments well i think thats the highest death count ive ever seen in a first paragraph Shouldn't Draconic be capitalized given it's a people? Or is there some kind of disdain I'm missing? *salamence Is this...

Hey there! Starting off another exchange with Born, Rebuilt. Quote Comments I like the nicknames given to the creatures based on their appearance. It reminds me of The Land Before Time that way. I read this multiple times and couldn't understand what it meant until later when I figured out...

Hey there! For our review exchange, I chose A Second Chance since the premise was interesting to me. I'm glad I chose it. Here are my thoughts. Quote Comments bruuhhhh thats so evil I really love the imagery of the lake. The fact that he sees a bear with cubs and doesn't immediately feel like...