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Hi, I'm here for the Catnip Circle, and picking up from the last chapter I looked at. It's been a pretty long time since I read the previous chapters, so forgive me if I unintentionally repeat something I've said before. Alright, here we go. *must have been, as it's not a direct quote. bro...

Chapter 3 Comma doesn't fit here as there are only two items and the "both x and y" structure doesn't use a comma in general. *passing? "Lying" rather than "laying", and a comma is needed after "dam". *Regigigas - this typo appeared a couple times in this chapter. Needs to end in a...

Hey there! I sure took my time getting to the second chapter, didn't I. Well, let's go. Hearing/senses are mentioned being strained in three successive paragraphs, which makes it stick out as repetitive. Extra word here? The mon is named spinarak, but I'm unsure if this is actually...

Hi there! Been meaning to check this out for a while, but never got around to it until now. Here are my thoughts on the prologue and first chapter. I feel like this paragraph is rendered a bit redundant by the ones that follow, as Haru does end up doing pretty much what's described here and so...