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Hey, Umbra! Here for your Blitz prize--thanks for being part of the Blitz! I'm responding to Chapter 4 and the bonus chapter. I've got some overall thoughts up top, and I set aside some small nitpicky things in the spoiler in case you want those another time. That said-- I know nothing about...

Umbra, we gotta get you some threadmarks and/or a hyperlinked table of contents! 😵 I’ve got some general comments here at the top and line-by-line responses below. I appreciate the parallel between Aaron and the riolu both dealing with feeling othered. They’re gonna appreciate finally becoming...

Replying to chapter 2 now! I listened on TTS instead of reading with my eyes, so this will be more generalized thoughts, not so many quoted passages. It’s interesting we’re seeing a different side of Polly. These kids feel very little to me, so her language felt way harsh (I’m a teacher, so...

I've got zero knowledge of the 8th movie, so let's see how this goes! Big Picture: This chapter launches us right into things. Normally I’d be all for it – it’s the worst when a story starts with five pages of waking up, brushing teeth, and eating breakfast before anything important happens –...