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Surprise, I'm back for Chapter 6! This one's pretty short and sweet, and everything I wanted to say ended up in the line quotes. 👋

Finally returning for Chapter 5, in which Red LARPS in real time as a wolf and gets too into it. I didn't read as critically as I normally do this time, so I guess hit me up if you were worried about a passage or beat I didn't touch on. One final note: it's a shame that Michi is out of the...

Quick reply replies! Dapple! Sunlight dapples the forest floor or the path or the tree trunks, etc. Oh, if you want "the hair on my arms stands on end" you can do that, too, but "hairs" plural with no qualifier reads weirdly to me. Right, but this seemed like it was in the context of her...

Hey, Canis. Reporting in with Chapter 4. Most of my comments this time came out in line reactions, so I'll just jump right in. I wish Joanna would've put up more of a fight here. (Unless this isn't all completely real and he's just seeing what he wants/expects? If so, it would be nice to get...

Therapist vs. psychiatrist--that's fair! And, hey, if you're drawing on your own experiences, more power to ya. I'm not sure! There could be a lot of correct answers, and I don't think I know enough yet about where you're taking the other threads to comment more. I might change my mind as I...

Hey Canis, A merry catnip to you. Here for Chapter 3! So, Red is off to therapy. I suspect it's not going to help him any time soon--it's really hard to heal if you're actively resisting it, lol--but it sure is making his life more complicated! I like how unprepared he is for her to know...

Hello, hello, I'm back for Chapter 2. So, right off the bat, I like Michi. Part of it's probably just that I like tough girls with pink hair, but it's also such a breath of fresh air to see someone stepping up to Red. And she's so kind to the ghosts! I also appreciate that he's Red and she's...

Hey canis! Here for the prologue (original flavor) and Chapter 1! I think I've managed to sample a little bit of all things Red Akai--the 3 one shots, a chapter of Seiren--except actual HH. Go figure. Guess I'm overdue. I'm just gonna jump in with line comments this time and I'll loop back for...