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Damn, these are the words I was missing as I was frantically trying to write before sprinting out the door from my dentist appointment, lololol. Where were you earlier??? Mood. Narrator for best character of the year? And you get a car, and you get a car! Wow, I'm so glad there was a happy...

Hey qva, read a couple chapters last night! (2 & 3.) So here’s Prim! She’s tough, not just by training but by wiliness. She’d rather cheat than lose, though I can’t tell if it’s because she’s fiercely competitive or prideful. (She definitely didn’t seem afraid of Ulric or of what might happen...

Finally responding to Chapter 1! Lol. I enjoyed Ferry’s perspective. Breath of fresh air to get a Pokémon POV after fucking Doran the Immaculate, haha. Ferry has an arrogant streak, but probably understandably. It’s how he keeps his head up. I like the name, too—evokes both the iron and the...

Dipping my toes in at last. Just the prologue for now, more later. :) What an excellent character moment this line is. I’d cut “itself.” The first sentence I think you can cut. The second sentence I suggest rewording: Their village was quaint, he had to admit, and not all too different in...