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Planning to formalize this in the appropriate channels, but I'd actually love no more reviews of the April Fool's chapter! It's a shitpost, so it's actually kind of maddening to get an earnest review on it when my actual work is sitting right there on either side of it. I have enjoyed the...

An Announcement It's been a tumultuous but exciting month for me. I've talked to a few of y'all about this privately, but since Flaze touched on this in his last review, I thought now might be a good time to talk in a more official capacity about what's happening. I spend enough time and...

Whoops, I replied to this first review in my head so many times I thought I'd actually done it. Let me remedy that. Thank you, as always! Okay, so. More on that in just a second. Hold that thought.

Chapter 16: Salvage The chain clanked as the anchor lowered, counting down link by link to the start of Natalie's first real mission. With a flutter in her belly, she peered over the rail and shaded her eyes. There was little to see but the sparkle of sun on the water and, farther out, the...

Thank you both for taking the time to read and drop some thoughts! I always appreciate it.

Yellow! What a treat. Thanks so much for stopping by. (And happy birthday again! 🎉 ) Catch you soon!

Chapter 15: Lines in the Sand Mauville offered endless distractions. The downtown strip was choked with bars, casinos, and sketchy battle halls, their exteriors modeled after other cities' landmarks: there was a replica of Prism Tower, a hotel shaped like an Alolan exeggutor, and a sprawling...

Wow, @Homestar!, you're really ripping through these! I'm impressed. I'm still working my way through The Loser, if more slowly. </👵 hobbling through the crosswalk> I've got a lot of "well akshually" in here and I'm aware of it. Please don't take it as ingratitude. I might not take you up on...

Review reply time! Thanks, all! ❤️ 🧡 💛 💚 💙 💜

Chapter 14: Liquid Courage The Motherfucker stretched the length of several city blocks, and tonight it was ORCA's playground. All five of their ships had anchored alongside the stolen freighter and pooled their crews into one heaving throng: at the center of the deck, a knot of dancers...

Look, replying to reviews is basically equivalent to actually working on my chapter, right? 😶 Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I'm glad it sounds like you were able to have some fun with it even though it wasn't your usual fare. :)

Patch notes: I've finally pushed through all the updates I've been sitting on since February. I kept telling myself I'd just update when I posted a new chapter, but it keeps taking longer than I expect. 😅 So I decided to just go for it. Most of these changes are minor except for the addition of...

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Chapter Forteen: Stone Sober Mauville looked pretty from up here, actually. The soft path lights were set among the flower beds, turning both the strolling couples and the trees into silhouettes, the high rises luminous beyond them. Improbable pillars of glass speared up through the foliage...

Hey Canis! I'm still really tickled that we essentially swapped brooding boys who like the color red. I enjoyed my half, and I'm glad it seems like you had fun with yours too! Thanks, as always. :D

OMG, I forgot you're way back here. If I've accidentally spoiled anything, I apologize! (I don't *think* I would've revealed anything major, or at least nothing that isn't better in the telling than in the bare facts.) But so nice to have you back! :D And thank you for catching all those...

Aww, hi! This was a nice surprise! I was contemplating a nap right before I saw this, and this was a nice way to get back into story mode instead. More soon! (Knock on wood.)

Hi, Sinder! This review was a lot of fun to read. :D Thanks again! See you around! :wink:

Hi @Cresselia92 & @Adamhuarts! Thank you both for all your comments and reflections! Lots to reply to here! 😻 Cheers to you both. Thanks for giving me some of your time!

Hi again, Flaze! Pfff, I appreciate you taking the time to review, period. I'm not the type to sit tapping my foot waiting for a review. I'm grateful for what I get. 🙏 Thanks again! I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. :D I'm going to scuttle away and try to make more words happen now. *...