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  1. WildBoots

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Responding to Chapter 3! I'll try to come back for Chapter 4 in the next day or so. Overall thoughts: So we've got a) Owen confronts deja vu head-on, to little effect b) Heart retiring ceremony c) Owen takes a test and d) Owen fights a training dummy. It's hard for me to say without having...
  2. WildBoots

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Back again for ⭐ Chapter 2! ⭐ The ordering of the sentences here threw me off. You clarify a few sentences later why he’s saying this, so it feels like vagueness for no reason. I appreciate how crafty the aerodactyl has been the whole time. He’s studied and knows his marks. “Shortly after”...
  3. WildBoots

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Alright, I read the prologue and the first chapter! I’ve got some line-by-line thoughts here, and I’ll give you general thoughts at the end. I like that we’re starting with action and a problem! It’s a little weird that these fangs are disembodied at first read though. Maybe “The beast plunged...
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