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Pokémon Out from the Deep (An Introduction)
Overall: your love of plants really shines here – I love the tangling of roots and the duckweed. It's lovely to see what, for me, was a lackluster Safari Zone rendered so lushly. That said, I think your story really starts in paragraph two. What I'd say was missing was more of Gad's internal...- Word Count: 320
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