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Pokémon Places We Call Home
I'm back for Catnip! Reading Chapter 4 this time - alas it did take me a few months. And this chapter is special! It is the post-e g g chapter! :D I live how Haru wakes up at the beginning of this like "everything's gonna be great today! :D" and NOPE, scared crowd and angry mob. And now they...- Word Count: 140
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- Post #66
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Pokémon Places We Call Home
Chapter 4 Review! I am. Very slow. And I didn't read much else due to lack of energy. But at least I got to read the ~revised version!~ I wanna star out by saying your writing has a lot of charm. A lot of moments here just made me smile. But a bullet pointing of my Opinions on Events: -Nip's...- Word Count: 150
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- Post #47
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Pokémon Places We Call Home
Chapter 3 Review! I love your prose, it can have a playful energy to it sometimes. Nip and Haru's dynamic is great, even when it brings up HORRIFYING MORAL DILEMMAS. Especially when it brings up HORRIFYING MORAL DILEMMAS. Also I love Mandi. Mandibuzz needs more love. ...Also a Lucario...- Word Count: 110
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- Post #33
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Pokémon Places We Call Home
Heyoooooooooooo I wanted to do some newbie fic reviews and I figured I'd start with you since you're not as far along here. I love, love, LOVE your prologue. That sort of in-universe myth and legend shit is -chef's kiss- I like the term "wildeners" to describe non-civilized Pokemon - the...- Word Count: 160
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