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  1. TheWinterComet

    Pokémon Hunter, Haunted

    Here's my review for the first chapter, Just Another Day. The juxtaposition of the end of the prologue has an interesting combination of both artifice (the idea that the non-murdery, human life is fake) and genuineness (that both are equally important and real to Red's psyche) that gives the...
  2. TheWinterComet

    Pokémon Hunter, Haunted

    Here's my review for the Prologue (original). The first thing that came to mind is some inconsistency in dash usage. Sometimes it’s double hyphens, sometimes it’s single hyphens, and in all instances, they are in places I would normally expect em dashes to be instead, which tripped me up...
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