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Here's my review for the third chapter, Capture. The emphasis that Marcus is backwater and not very technologically savvy helps to make him more endearing, especially since I think actual description of his character was fairly light in the past couple of chapters outside of his clear “novice...

Here's my review for the second chapter, Wilderness. I liked Marcus taking gradual steps to attempt to win the Sandshrew over, both because I personally can’t resist attempting (and failing) to make friends with wild animals and because it established a more normalized expectation of failure in...

Here's my review for the first chapter, Boulder. I note a critique on language, but I probably wouldn't finish in any reasonable time if I did proper line edits. Opening with an action scene is exciting, but with very little additional context, it leaves me with no strong opinion about the...