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Chapters 4 - 7 Review Lots of twists and turns to cover. First off, the big one—Archie being Natalie’s lost older brother. I was anticipating him to be lost for most of the story, and I had even anticipated he would be part of Magma, not Aqua. Guess I couldn’t have been more wrong. As far as...

Chapter 3 Review — I can’t help but wonder if the unseen figure who threw the rock was a double-agent. Then again, this is Team Magma’s adapted equivalent we’re talking about, so perhaps I should hold off on giving the benefit of the doubt :< — I loved the detail put into the “bored” driver...

Chapter 2 Review Three things I wanted to comment on here: — I like how lived-in the gym (and other elements of the world) feels. You describe it like a regular workplace, which is what one would expect it to be. It’s still early on, but I’m sensing a pattern where you’re targeting aspects of...

Chapter 1 Review — Hey! Saw someone had posted about this in Official Actions and decided to give it a try. — Holy tension. It’s like boom boom boom, no time to sit down and learn about the main character because it’s a gradually increasing sprint from the get-go. And yet, that buildup does...