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Really great start here. Seeing her just be an utter tool for no reason at all was hilarious, and Shine standing up to her was cathartic. It was a great introduction that all felt super in character from everyone involved. Even showed a bit more about the characters, like just how much Curio...

Oh hey you can change font, neat. Review Chapters 5-7 That zoom enhance joke caught me off guard. It was good, cracked me up, but it felt out of place. As far as I can remember, this was the first time something like this was integrated into his internal dialogue. I can't think of any overt...

Chapters 3&4 Your grasp on pacing is really incredible. I'm always excited to read what's coming next, always involved in what's happening, with well timed light scenes so it's not exhausting. (A particularly enjoyable bit being the Pikachu Café, though that might be a bit of personal bias on...

[Review for chapters 1&2] I loved this so much. It has such a great, powerful opening that hooks you in, and the way you slowly build up Shine's character with his general nervousness on multiple occassions until an acute episode of why he's like that, it's so well done. It's excellently...