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Hey hey! Here to review Chapter 10! (And by review, I just mean leave compliments that make you feel good because I don't know how to give constructive crit XD) I didn't expect Brendan and May to be in this fic! They always strike me as a more "kiddy" aspect of RSE and seeing them in this adult...

I'm a simple girl. I see Continental Divides is updated. I click. Also side note, the title "fault lines" is also the title of a song by a favorite of mine lol I'd think you could do without "into the heat;" just makes the sentence sound repetitive imo I'm wondering how she's gaping if half...

lolllll so when I saw Chapter 8 was out, I was like "Yay! I'm gonna be the first to review it!" only to see you've gotten like 5 reviews since then 😅 Well isn't that a mood. GIBS! I used to use four-dot ellipses until I was told that three-dots are correct in novel writing; idk if you've...

I'm so glad to see this being updated again! And we get to see Team Aqua's ship, to boot!! It's like an early Christmas! Ah, I hear these words almost every day. Well, not exactly these words, but stuff along these lines. It's always interesting looking at these arguments and the...

Hello hello! I have owed you this review for so long and am finally getting around to it! First off, gotta say I internally squee'd when I saw Steven. I don't even know what his role is in this story or what his attitude will boy, but as a Hoenn fan I am very excited. Interesting. So Pokemon...

A few weeks late, but better late then never, amiright? I want to apologize if I come across as overly nitpicky. I just pointed out whatever stuck out to me, and that just happened to be more than usual this time around. Overall, your stuff is still very good! Anyway, let's get into it...

For whatever reason, this following area stuck out to me (sorry for not quoting originally lol not sure why I missed that) You're certainly not egregious about it, and most places I think you do a good job of switching dialogue between two people. I just felt like the tags/descriptions in this...

Hey! Sorry this review is less organized than usual; I'm on my tablet instead of computer and it's more difficult/annoying to move stuff around. Oh I totally agree. Just thought I would check out of curiosity lol. Thanks for the clarifications! Chapter 3 Just a general comment is that you put...

You review me, I review you! When you said that you had an Aqua/Magma story, I HAD to read it. I don't often find other fics or one-shots about these evil teams! And while neither has made an appearanc yet (unless someone is undercover??) you've got a neat little story so far. It seems to me...