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Heya, dusting off another RB target of mine by getting current with ES again. The same disclaimers apply to this chapter as with Chapter 11, but I’d like to think that it’s been long enough since I’ve seen this chapter that I can go back and take a sober look at stuff I might have overlooked...

Full disclosure, for the longest time I was hesitant to write a review for this chapter since I had already gotten a chance to look under the hood when it was being put together, and left quite a few beta-level critiques as it was being written. That said, I think that it's been more than long...

Heya, I'm finally back with reviews for the rest of Eternal Shadows to catch up with your story. This review took me longer than I expected to cobble together, but I'm hoping that you'll find the feedback helpful for your future writings and any changes you opt to make to these chapters in the...

Heya, back again with another chapter review. Originally, I was going to do this as part of another multi-chapter review, but things wound up expanding time and content-wise much as they did in Chapter 7’s review to the point where I thought it made the most sense to just publish things as-is...

Alright, continuing on from my last review. This one only covers Chapter 7, which is less material than I was initially hoping to cover since it wound up turning out significantly longer than I expected, to the point where it’s as long as the last review covering chapters 4-6. Once again mostly...

Alright, picking up where I left off on my last review from Eternal Shadows, this time featuring Chapters 4-6. I’ll mostly try to avoid being a broken record on some fic-level suggestions from the first three chapters, though you might see a few recommendations here and there that were also...

Full disclosure, this is actually my second pass through Eternal Shadows. This pass will be a bit more critical in nature, since you’ve already gotten my initial impressions from my first readthrough, with my eye focused more on identifying things that I feel will help you out for future...