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Oooooh, aftermath time! Overall, I think this chapter works just fine. There's a lot of discussions that needed to happen one way or another, and probably are better off for Odette to happen sooner rather than later anyway. Obviously the chapter would have been longer without cutting the...

YEEEEEEEEEEE IT'S TIIIIME!! [Quick thoughts while reading the Venira Origin Story: You mentioned the length of this chapter. I feel like you probably could have worked in the opening scene with Noel and Odette into the ending of the previous chapter and started this one with Odette waking up...

OH BOY OH BOY OH BOY Okay, so I'm glad they're all on the same page of "time to murder the drug clown king" and glad Clovis has a level head enough to be like "yo we gotta actually plan how to do this first". Odette and Noel would not be in for a good time if they'd managed to go try to...

Finally!! You know, I am 100% straight, but can't say I blame Noel here. Max sounds like quite a looker. Aw hell yeah, I don't remember if I knew he had one of these, but I am thrilled for cryogonal rep! Given that Clovis is somewhat of an important character throughout the whole fic, I...

How did I not realize there was an April Fool's segment?! Glorious, very well crafted. And, naturally, hilarious!

Okay, so, chapter 13, we're finally getting info on these blood-types! Lots of info I was pressing on not too long ago. Not sure if this was planned for this chapter and I was impatient, or if my impatience lead to you adding all this, but it's good to get all this clarification in-fic, either...

Okay, this took me way too long considering 11 was posted so soon after I'd gotten caught up, so time to do some... well, catch-up. First, a couple thoughts from chapter 11: All in all, a good, slower-paced chapter for Odette to get back to reality! Aaaand now for 11.5! Well, you weren't...

Oooookay, buckle up because this is gonna be long! Since this was on my list of long overdue reads, I just binge-read this entire thing in one sitting. I... really wish I'd thought to break my comments up by chapter or something, but I did not, so... here they all are, all at once. I'll spoiler...