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Been meaning to reply to this. First off, I appreciate the feedback on the lines. I've noticed comma splices are something I need to work on heavily! They are all over my fic now reading back. >_< LOL YES. Lance and his eyebrows! He always looks so serious and he intimidates people so easily...

Chapter 2: Muddy Impressions In the cool morning air, the sun shined upon Johto's metropolis. Light stretched across Goldenrod's skyscrapers under blue skies. For Whitney, it was a perfect day to run a favor. Jasmine called at such a good time, Whitney reminisced on the conversation with her...

Whitney is going to be a major character in the story. So expect more of her in future chapters! As for her relationship with Lance - even though they have met before, that doesn't necessarily mean she knows everything about him. It was more of a cordial matter back then and for the first time...

Thank you for your review, Blue! I appreciate the feedback. I'll see if I can make any corrections, minor ones that don't drastically change the story the way I intended. I do agree with some of your points, I think I could expand further if I have to. LMAO wait until you see how the rest of...

Ahhh, thank you so much Pen! I feel so grateful and honored you reviewed the first chapter of my fic! :D I am glad you enjoy Lance's character so far! Of course, people have different interpretations but I always saw him as a stern, responsible and humble guy. With a bit of a competitive side...

Chapter 1: Encounter at The Lighthouse Olivine City was a simple gateway from Johto to Kanto. Lance would pass through on occasion, boarding the S.S. Aqua to reach Vermilion City. The other occasion would be the Battle Frontier. Even as Indigo League Champion, Lance liked to indulge in other...

Tempered Skies Rating: T Summary: Set during the events of HeartGold & SoulSilver, a newly traded dratini sparks a meeting between Olivine's Gym Leader Jasmine, and the Indigo League Champion, Lance. As they get acquainted, many secrets unfold regarding their own pasts, ambitions, and duties...