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Pokémon Ascension
We talked on discord about the most salient points. I.E. it’s okay to backload worldbuilding, maybe cut the Oak scene entirely because it’s v overused and doesn’t add much, your Pokemon are great and I love them. Chapter 2 was way stronger than Chapter 1, probably because less info dumping and...- Word Count: 160
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