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8. Reading Is Essential This chapter seems to be a bit of a recap/exposition. We start with Odette internet-stalking Clovis. Then Noel comes in with the smoking book that puts into words the connection between shinies and blood pokemon that seemed to be crystallizing at the end of the last...

7. Something's Rotten in Kalos Rich people party time! And quite a lot of it, too. The principle events before the big battle are Odette observing the shinies, Odette meeting Clovis, and Odette observing how Clovis and Dorien interact. I think these main beats could have happened with somewhat...

6. Psychopath Well, Odette's plan is going swimmingly, I don't know why anyone doubted her. Ahem. I liked that we started with a time skip. No need for us to experience every painful initial interaction--you take us right to the one where something happens. But before I get to that, a wild...

Chapter 4 - She's Unabashedly Nosy & Chapter 5 - How Could This Possibly Be a Good Idea? Back for more WSBS! In this chapter we meet Odette's grandfather. It's obvious as soon as Odette walks into his office that they're close and I thought you did a nice job getting across their bond, from...

Hi Sind! Back for some more WSBS and I thought I'd start off with your revised prologue to get me back into the swing of things. It's definitely an expansion! All the things I remember from the first prologue--seven deadly sin pokemon, grunts being nommed on, memory-loss child--happen, but we...

Hey, Sind! I started off where I'd left off, at Chapter 3, but I quickly realized you'd made some big edits since I last read, so I gave Chapters 1 and 2 a quick reread first. Chapters One and Two Chapter one gets off to a much snappier start than I remembered. The sacrilege and shiny trade...

For Smeargle Swap, my favorite moment from chapter two! Featuring Odette and her very good friend, Road Rage.

Hey Sinderella, welcome to the forum! This story opens with a bang--a lot of cool concepts from the get-go. Pokemon powered by human blood are nicely creepy. It reminds me a bit of how in Kill la Kill the killer uniforms are activated and fueled by blood. Right now it seems like a single...