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Hey flaze! Hype to see chapter two up! Once again, really enjoying your full sense of world. Miguel and Benito's interactions continue to be one of my favorite parts. I also really enjoyed his relationship with Nadia. They definitely come off as siblings or cousins. They're very at ease, but...

Flaze, I super enjoyed this! It's a big change from the first version, and I think it really works. Starting with Miguel's POV lets us get thrown in a lot more quickly, and gives us some context to appreciate when Keita wanders into all of this. (Which I am hype for.) Miguel's an instantly...

Here thanks to some shilling by OSJ! I liked the scene-setting in this opening chapter—little details like the well-tended white scooter, his father's flipping prowess. Keita's fear of going into the Calle Ocho sector combined with his vexation about the fact that his family would get a new...