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Ah, I see. That completely went over my head. Is there a particular reason you use 'feral' to mean 'non-sapient'? It just seems to me that feral has pretty strong and established connotations of wild, savage, aggressive, etc. Oh yeah, I completely get that. I'm not much a fan of writing action...

Part 3 Curious about this. How do they obtain the wool? If the mareep are feral, I imagine they don't docilely allow themselves to be groomed. A+ logic The passive voice is a bit strange here. We've just been in Sisi's head and so it's weird for the narration to switch to put us outside...

Part 2 This story continues to be sweet. I really appreciate the depth of your worldbuilding--each species of pokemon seems to have its own social structure and stereotypes about the others. The tension between pokemon like Pletora and the guildrens is also an interesting split. Heh, this...

I liked the naturalistic qualities of this. When Pletora was thinking about munching the larvae, not going to lie, I started getting hungry too for delicious bugs. You do a nice job creating a sense of world and ecosystem. Pletora's choice to intercede for the oddish strikes a balance between...