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    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Back for Catnip Circle, this time for chapter three! Gonna echo my chapter two review and say that internal narration remains the stumbling block for me here. The things Owen says and does often seem to be at odds with his thoughts, and he'll have thoughts in one part that seem like they would...
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    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Back again for Catnip Circle, reviewing chapter two. This chapter felt a lot stronger to me prose-wise! The action sequences flowed for the most part and I really liked the uneasy atmosphere you built up at Rhy's house. I also appreciated the interlude with the paras. That showed a lot of good...
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    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Here for Catnip Circle—I read the prologue and first chapter! Plot-wise, it's hard to say much when I know this is the beginning of a 300k+ epic, but I think you do a good job seeding that there's something big and strange going on that Owen is unwittingly tangled up in. We've got mutants after...
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